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Re: Specail agent Bob and Secret Agent Steve Chapter 1
W00T more X-Play viewers! It was quite funny, worthy of the real show itself, but I had a one problem. One is that it would be hard for other readers ...
Mar 21, 2008 -
Re: The Battle Chapter 1(Part One): Break In
Very nice beginning, I did not see any grammer or spelling mistakes, and it kept my attention the whole time. Then you ended it at a cliffhanger! I curse thee! ...
Mar 21, 2008 -
Re: The Chronicles of Syn: Sins of Prologues.
The Chronicles of Syn Sins of Prologues By: SoTP Welcome, one and all. Before I can start, I must inform you all of something you should be aware of. People ...
Mar 21, 2008 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [5]
Yeah...um...Doctor Kitty... I stole your uber guitar. *Runs to the hills*
Mar 21, 2008 -
Re: The Perfect Mistake
Thanks for the review Nightsdreamer! Part II is up.
Mar 21, 2008 -
Re: Gone
Actaully I kinda liked the cheesey beginning, it reminded me somewhat like the opening of a Walt Disney movie. Expect it seems like there is no going to be no ...
Mar 21, 2008 -
Re: Rate the Signature Above You [2]
7/10 Very clever, and quite a nice quote.
Mar 20, 2008 -
Re: Derek-My Life As A Fantasy Story
Entertaining beginning, but this is what I noticed wrong: With this power we began unstoppable. 'Began' is an odd word to use for this snetience. Perhaps you should rewrite it ...
Mar 20, 2008 -
Re: The Perfect Mistake
The Perfect Mistake By: Isaac Also of series: The Perfect Mistake: Part I Part II The voice left me here in the abyss of my mind. Even though it seemed ...
Mar 20, 2008 -
Re: Phenotype -- Part One
Quite an interesting tale you are spinning. Something that bothered me was that the Messiah was awake when he was dieing, I belive most patients that near death were put ...
Mar 20, 2008 -
Re: Unititled [Preface]
Interesting subject, but more would be useful for exaiming the character closer. I mean she did nothing while her father murdered. I have nothing to say when exaiming the story ...
Mar 20, 2008 -
Re: Echos of War
I try to leave it up to the reader to deicde what it was about. But I saw it a a struggle between the inhuman and human, companies operte inhumanianly ...
Mar 19, 2008 -
Re: The Perfect Mistake
Thanks for the review! Part II will probebly be out tomorrow, but I will make sure to keep in mind what I need to work on. Here's to perhaps a ...
Mar 19, 2008 -
Re: "Lucky Me" Chapter 1
It was a pretty funny, mainly around about the Burger Monster subject. I don't know if you were going to be funny or not, I just found it to be ...
Mar 18, 2008 -
Re: Echos of War
Thanks bluecows, I like most people love action, but this story was not about action persay.
Mar 18, 2008